The chronicle's enchantment lines no longer all run image, colon, consequence; each keeps its picture and its exact fact in its own sentence shape, and the about panel's tally heading and two of its closing flourishes are said plainly, since a page of one sentence pattern reads as written by a machine

Co-Authored-By: Claude Fable 5.1 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0141G6xqLeNRYEtviLWSB5Up

src/lib/components/Hall.svelte

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 			...Object.entries(t.byGame).filter(([label]) => !told.has(label)).map(([label, n]) => ({ n, label }))
 		];
 		const first = t.firstGameAt ? `The first duel began ${new Date(t.firstGameAt).toLocaleDateString(undefined, { year: 'numeric', month: 'long', day: 'numeric' })}. ` : '';
-		return { headline, details, note: `${first}Names are counted, not people: one player under two names is two here. Table time counts only the minutes between reveals, so a duel left open overnight adds nothing for the night.` };
+		return { headline, details, note: `${first}The count is of names, so one player under two names is two here. Table time counts only the minutes between reveals, so a duel left open overnight adds nothing for the night.` };
 	});
 	/** The other games of Kestrel's Hall, for the about panel. */
 	let family = $state<FamilyGame[]>([]);
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@
 	{/snippet}
 	{#snippet aboutTally()}
 		{#if told}
-			<TallyBoard title="How much love the duel is getting" headline={told.headline} details={told.details} note={told.note} />
+			<TallyBoard title="What the ledgers add up to" headline={told.headline} details={told.details} note={told.note} />
 		{:else}
 			<p class="muted">Counting…</p>
 		{/if}
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@
 			{/if}
 			<p class="hosting">
 				The games of Kestrel's Hall are free and will stay free. They run on small servers that cost a few dollars a month, and anyone who wants to chip in toward the hosting can do so at
-				<a href="https://ko-fi.com/kestrelsnest" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">ko-fi.com/kestrelsnest</a>. Chipping in unlocks nothing, and nothing is held back without it.
+				<a href="https://ko-fi.com/kestrelsnest" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">ko-fi.com/kestrelsnest</a>. Chipping in unlocks nothing, and the games are the same for everyone.
 			</p>
 			<p class="made">Waving Hands is Richard Bartle's, 1977.</p>
 		</div>