An editing pass over the words around the game, and three corrections in the guide

The guide, the hall, the room page and the explanations after a turn
lose their closing aphorisms, most of their semicolons, the
statement-colon-example lines and the page narrating itself. The
tagline is one sentence, and 'a labor of love' is gone from the about
link. The chronicle's imagery and the in-world names stay.

Corrected along the way: a counter-spell does stop wound spells and
lightning (the guide said it did not); a shield is not the only defence
against a newly summoned creature; on the first turn a knife can hurt
you; a palm is no defence against a fireball; a goblin needs five turns
to match one; and only the offline duel lives in the browser.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0141G6xqLeNRYEtviLWSB5Up
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Eric WagonerandClaude Opus 5.5 committed 2026-10-10 18:51:59 -04:00
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<form class="slip" aria-labelledby="report-heading" onsubmit={send}>
<h2 id="report-heading">Something amiss?</h2>
{#if sent}
<p class="thanks">Recorded beside the room's ledger, with the turn. Thank you; the keeper will study the moment.{#if error} {error}{/if}</p>
<p class="thanks">Recorded beside the room's ledger, with the turn. Thank you. The keeper will look into it.{#if error} {error}{/if}</p>
{:else}
<label class="field">
<span>What happened?</span>
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<input type="file" accept="image/png,image/jpeg,image/webp" onchange={pickImage} />
{#if preview}<img class="preview" src={preview} alt="The screenshot you chose" />{/if}
</label>
<p class="muted small">The room code and the turn ride along; the keeper can replay the duel to this moment.</p>
<p class="muted small">The room code and the turn are sent with it, so the keeper can replay the duel to this moment.</p>
{#if error}<p class="warning">{error}</p>{/if}
<div class="actions">
<button type="submit" class="reveal small" disabled={!happened.trim() || busy}>{busy ? 'Sending' : 'Send it'}</button>