An editing pass over the words around the game, and three corrections in the guide

The guide, the hall, the room page and the explanations after a turn
lose their closing aphorisms, most of their semicolons, the
statement-colon-example lines and the page narrating itself. The
tagline is one sentence, and 'a labor of love' is gone from the about
link. The chronicle's imagery and the in-world names stay.

Corrected along the way: a counter-spell does stop wound spells and
lightning (the guide said it did not); a shield is not the only defence
against a newly summoned creature; on the first turn a knife can hurt
you; a palm is no defence against a fireball; a goblin needs five turns
to match one; and only the offline duel lives in the browser.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0141G6xqLeNRYEtviLWSB5Up
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{#if duel.surrendering}
<p class="warning">Both palms at once is surrender. You will lose the duel.</p>
{:else if duel.loneClap && !duel.moved}
<p class="warning">A clap needs both hands; one hand clapping does nothing. Clap with both, or rest the other hand.</p>
<p class="warning">A clap needs both hands, and one hand clapping does nothing. Clap with both, or rest the other hand.</p>
{/if}
{#if duel.conflict}
<p class="warning">Those two spells share a gesture, and a gesture can finish only one spell. Let one of them pass.</p>