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Writing for players: the editing passes' lessons, and the template written by them

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The conventions gain a list of the habits players read as generated text
(a semicolon in every paragraph, statement-colon-explanation, "The" plus
an abstract noun as a heading, clipped fragments in threes, closing
aphorisms, "X, not Y", the page talking about itself), and of the errors
that come from inherited text: hidden information where there is none,
points where there are none, "both" at a larger table, unchecked claims,
and ledger-stored words reworded. new-game.sh points at the list.

The template follows it: the about link loses 'a labor of love', the
tabs are Origins and Games so far, and the hall, lobby, room, report
slip, table talk, guide and demo board read as Waving Hands' and
Hnefatafl's now do. The landing page and family.json carry the two
games' new taglines and lose their semicolons and the tip jar's aphorism.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0141G6xqLeNRYEtviLWSB5Up
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Eric Wagoner
2026-10-11 10:34:08 -04:00
co-authored by Claude Opus 5.5
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<form class="slip" aria-labelledby="report-heading" onsubmit={send}>
<h2 id="report-heading">Something amiss?</h2>
{#if sent}
<p class="thanks">Recorded beside the room's ledger, with the round. Thank you; the keeper will study the moment.{#if error} {error}{/if}</p>
<p class="thanks">Recorded beside the room's ledger, with the turn. Thank you. The keeper will look into it.{#if error} {error}{/if}</p>
{:else}
<label class="field">
<span>What happened?</span>
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
<input type="file" accept="image/png,image/jpeg,image/webp" onchange={pickImage} />
{#if preview}<img class="preview" src={preview} alt="The screenshot you chose" />{/if}
</label>
<p class="muted small note">The room code and the round ride along; the keeper can replay the game to this moment.</p>
<p class="muted small note">The room code and the turn are sent with it, so the keeper can replay the game to this moment.</p>
{#if error}<p class="warning">{error}</p>{/if}
<div class="actions">
<button type="submit" class="commit small" disabled={!happened.trim() || busy}>{busy ? 'Sending' : 'Send it'}</button>