Writing for players: the editing passes' lessons, and the template written by them
The conventions gain a list of the habits players read as generated text (a semicolon in every paragraph, statement-colon-explanation, "The" plus an abstract noun as a heading, clipped fragments in threes, closing aphorisms, "X, not Y", the page talking about itself), and of the errors that come from inherited text: hidden information where there is none, points where there are none, "both" at a larger table, unchecked claims, and ledger-stored words reworded. new-game.sh points at the list. The template follows it: the about link loses 'a labor of love', the tabs are Origins and Games so far, and the hall, lobby, room, report slip, table talk, guide and demo board read as Waving Hands' and Hnefatafl's now do. The landing page and family.json carry the two games' new taglines and lose their semicolons and the tip jar's aphorism. Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 <noreply@anthropic.com> Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_0141G6xqLeNRYEtviLWSB5Up
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2. Fill in the hall's pitch, tag and about panel (src/lib/components/Hall.svelte),
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the rules page, the guide, src/app.html's description, and the palette in src/app.css.
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Write every line a player reads in the game's own voice: an image with each
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fact (docs/conventions.md, "The voice").
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fact (docs/conventions.md, "The voice"). Then read every page against
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"Writing for players" in the same file, the template's own lines included.
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Add static/og.png (1200 by 630) and static/apple-touch-icon.png (180 by 180):
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app.html already points at them, and the static fallback serves the hall's
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HTML for a missing file, so a share card without the image breaks quietly.
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