diff --git a/static/family.json b/static/family.json
index 3305950..155ee63 100644
--- a/static/family.json
+++ b/static/family.json
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
       "slug": "dip",
       "name": "Dip",
       "url": "https://dip.kestrelsnest.social",
-      "pitch": "Seven powers. One map. Nobody has to keep their word.",
+      "pitch": "Seven powers share one map, and none of them has to keep its word.",
       "players": "2 to 7",
       "origin": "Allan B. Calhamer's Diplomacy, 1959; an unofficial rebuild"
     }